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Example 3

Page history last edited by Benjamin L. Stewart, PhD 7 years ago

It is always important for the teacher to adopt a positive attitude towards student speaking. When teachers adopt a favorable position towards students, they are also teaching students to develop a positiive attitude. As a result, students will feel more confident when performing oral tasks.

Comments (5)

Mariesther Lemus said

at 5:06 pm on Jan 14, 2016

I would advise the students not to start a paragraph or a main sentence with "it". Using the key aspect as a subject makes claims stronger and clearer.

Carmen Loera said

at 5:45 pm on Jan 14, 2016

The first sentence is too general.

Luis said

at 11:34 am on Jan 15, 2016

How about the corrected version?

Embracing a positive attitude towards student writing is beneficial for both students and teachers. When teachers adopt a helpful position towards students, they are also teaching students to develop a positiive attitude. As a result, students will feel more confident when performing oral tasks.

LOLIS said

at 1:00 pm on Jan 15, 2016

I think it is too repetitive.

Yanahalti said

at 6:51 pm on Jan 18, 2016

It needs to be more specific and thought.

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